Note: This is more just like a list which I’ve attempted to give a vague sense of structure, flow and rhyme to. To be honest, I just wanted to think about things that make me feel happy so I don’t even care if nobody reads or likes this post, it was just nice to write :)
Playing instruments solo or in orchestra, writing songs, singing with my guitar,
Listening to John Williams, AC/DC, Chas & Dave, or rappers spitting bars,
The sun outside or the winter snow, birds tweeting close or far,
Gazing in awe at the night sky, admiring space and stars,
Hanging out with mates and reconnecting with friends from the past,
A simple ‘hello’ and a smile from a stranger as they pass,
Learning of the victories of those around me, big or small,
Or just watching Tottenham score a goal,
Dreaming of the Triumph Tiger 900 Rally I don’t yet own,
Walking around and exploring different places alone.
I think you just showed how poetry is in everything and everywhere!
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is a fine poem. Don’t let anyone tell you different. But Tottenham…really?
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you haha ๐๐ Judging by your name… Liverpool?
LikeLike
Rhymer to rhymer
So nice to meet you
Your rhyme was nice reading
(Nice flow, rhythm too)
And you’re not irrelevant….
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nice to meet you too haha, thank you for your kindness and for reading ๐
LikeLike
amazing post. I just stumbled upon your article and wished to say that Iโve really enjoyed browsing your blog post. After all Iโll be subscribing to your rss feed and I hope you write again soon!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Your happy thoughts, shared just because, express a peaceful Sunday vibe.๐
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m glad, thank you! ๐
LikeLike
Poets have a scent, you’ll know them from a distance. I like it
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!! ๐
LikeLike
Wow!! I love this piece, it has a good dreamy vibe to it ๐ I read it thriceโคโคโค
LikeLiked by 1 person
Aww thanks so much!! ๐
LikeLiked by 1 person
I really like this ๐
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! ๐
LikeLike
I strangely enough enjoy doing a lot of these things, ‘a simple hello and smile from a stranger,’ definitely one of the things that always cheers me up! I try it to them! Very insightful post ๐
LikeLiked by 1 person
Same, small gestures can do a lot ๐ Thank you so much!
LikeLiked by 1 person
My pleasure.
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is beautifull and totally relevant @anirrelevantgirl. Thank you for sharing. Keep up. ๐๐
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much ๐
LikeLiked by 1 person
Itโs an awesome post! Really like the way you structured it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you ๐
LikeLiked by 1 person
Loved it!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!
LikeLike
โGazing in awe at the night sky, admiring space and starsโ ….love doing this too!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Haha the night sky is so beautiful! Thanks for reading ๐
LikeLiked by 1 person
Great idea!
Given the current state of the world, it is always great to look at the positives!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Exactly! Thank you ๐
LikeLike
I was with you until you said Tottenham scoring a goal…But I’m a very forgiving person. Nice poem-ish. ๐
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hahaha fair enough! Wondering who you support… ๐๐ Thank you for reading! ๐
LikeLike
I’m a Man Utd fan (although I’m from London, hence my disdain for Tottenham ๐).
LikeLiked by 1 person
You call yourself an irrelevant girl ๐น๐น๐น
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yeah haha ๐ Thanks for reading!
LikeLike
My pleasure ๐
LikeLiked by 1 person
That’s a nice post straight from your heart!! You just feel to express out and then just do it!! These then are the true words and feelings! Herebelow is one from me. Maybe you will like it!!
Sometimes
Sometimes you get the feel of being alone
Even though you are in the midst of crowd
Sometimes you get the feel of emptiness
Even though your are occupied in full
Sometimes you feel totally let down
Even though you are fully supported
Sometimes you get the feel of being cheated
Even though you are being loved abundantly
Sometimes you feel that something is wrong
Even though everything is going on smoothly
Sometimes you feel these sometimes are several times
Even though these had been only sometimes!
Just get yourselves up and look on the flip sides
And keep moving ahead leaving behind the thought of sometimes!!
NaRaa
28Jul2019
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you for all the comments haha, I appreciate it!! This is a nice poem, I like the way it is structured:)
LikeLike
Hey..nice post…..I am ritz….please like my blogs after u read it….let’s keep in contact like that…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you ๐
LikeLike
I like your thoughts expressed in poetry. It is the simple things that matter
Daphne
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Daphne!! ๐
LikeLike